just had the time to play through it, this is awesome! I love how the narrator goes between second and third person to foreshadow how Maxwell connects with ciar's story, and the indistinct shapes and washy colours of the art really sell his constant uncomfortable zoned-out state. given you're saying this is your first VN, im excited to see what you make next!! :]
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just had the time to play through it, this is awesome! I love how the narrator goes between second and third person to foreshadow how Maxwell connects with ciar's story, and the indistinct shapes and washy colours of the art really sell his constant uncomfortable zoned-out state. given you're saying this is your first VN, im excited to see what you make next!! :]
@lentil-brainworld tysm! Also I am definitely preparing more vns/games in the making for the future...
Oooh! I didn't know you were working on a visual novel. I need to check this out!