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vagueshape museariadne

2 years ago

this week's fill! i love the imagery of the oroborous (the serpent that eats his tail) and decided to write a little poem. I'm not great with rhyming so I think it sounds a little clunky, but I would love to turn this one into a song once day, maybe with the last stanza as the chorus! https://vagueshape.neocities.org/muse

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ryomakesthings 2 years ago

I like this, in a sense it feels like an ode to life itself in all its facets through the cyclicality of the oroborous. I think your passion for its imagery shines through very clearly!

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manyface 2 years ago

this made me smile a lot as i read it. i like the ouroboros too and this poem felt so earnestly joyful and appreciative of the cyclicality of the cosmos!

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caesthoffe 2 years ago

loveeee your choice of language, feels very flowy and powerful at the same time :))

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tehuan 2 years ago

oh this is so gorgeous n i Def feel like it could make such a cool song !!

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caesthoffe museariadne

2 years ago

did my prompt for the week !! its a little unconventional, but i ended up combining two prompts, because i hadnt written anything for weeek 23 and when i saw what week 24 was for i immediately was inspired :>> so enjoy https://caesthoffe.neocities.org/writing/muse#week-23&24

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tehuan 2 years ago

AHH this is so cool & i love that you fucked around with two prompts at once !! awesome move :]

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ryomakesthings 2 years ago

that last line hits hard, I love your version of it. I get the sense of an ember of hope burning through the desperation and exhaustion. Great work!

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manyface 2 years ago

this is so awesome, i really liked it. it's so powerful and heavy and tender all at once!

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manyface museariadne

2 years ago

i did this week's prompt! i translated a poem from russian :) https://manyface.neocities.org/muse#translation - j

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tehuan 2 years ago

oh this is so beautiful, ty for sharing

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ryomakesthings 2 years ago

thank you for sharing this with us, it's a very powerful and evocative poem - can't speak for the original piece but it's a great translation, I'm sure the former is just as biting!

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manyface 2 years ago

@xalli @ryo thank you so much!! that means a lot to me! translating stuff is fun, especially when you get to play with it a little! :D

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caesthoffe 2 years ago

translation is a skill that i respect so much, amazing job :))

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manyface 2 years ago

@caesthoffe thank you so much!! after writing, i was delighted to learn that nobody has ever translated this particular poem before i did (and if they did, it's not online) - j

museariadne

2 years ago

new prompt posted for this week !!

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caesthoffe 2 years ago

oh my GODDD im so excited for this one

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ryomakesthings museariadne

2 years ago

just posted the latest prompt - I really like how this one came out, felt like experimenting with new formats. https://ryomakesthings.neocities.org/clubs/muse/

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vagueshape 2 years ago

this was so fun to read!!! i really like the formatting of this one, i think its so unique

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manyface 2 years ago

this was so cute and cool!! we liked this a lot, you're so creative with all the different formats you use! - j and shades

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shibardnek museariadne

2 years ago

hi!! i've finally made my muse page and i'd love to join your club :) muse page can be found here https://shibardnek.neocities.org/muse and i have a button on my main page here https://shibardnek.neocities.org/main

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tehuan 2 years ago

added !! :]

manyface museariadne

2 years ago

i did the prompt for this week (stones) https://manyface.neocities.org/muse#stones and j did the prompt of the week of march 25th (second person) https://manyface.neocities.org/muse#you. - shades

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ryomakesthings 2 years ago

July 8th is probably one of my favourite poems I've seen from you guys - so, so very powerful and I adore the direction in which you took the prompt. also love the format of march 25th!

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manyface 2 years ago

thank you so much, ryo. that means a lot to me - i am very glad my words resonated with you. - shades

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percevalprintpress museariadne

2 years ago

I've finally starting writing again! Mine for this week is short: a haiku https://percevalprintpress.neocities.org/writing/muse/

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ryomakesthings 2 years ago

I love haikus! I really like how you interpreted the prompt, it's a very unique concept and you put it very well - I can almost hear a clock ticking faintly in the distance. really like it!

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manyface 2 years ago

this is great, thank you so much for sharing. i like how it has a twist despite being so concise. it's powerful. - shades

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percevalprintpress 2 years ago

thank you!! yes I always try to challenge myself to end a haiku with a new meaning/twist

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ryomakesthings museariadne

2 years ago

finally answered the prompt from last week - it's rather short but it felt right in the moment. https://ryomakesthings.neocities.org/clubs/muse/

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manyface 2 years ago

ryo, this is beautiful and very potent. it gives me the impression of an ancient message carved into stone, lost to eternity and found millennia later. - shades

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museariadne

2 years ago

new prompt up !! :] write about stones as keepers of stories and witnesses to history. what silent wisdom do things like stones have, with their enduring presence?

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owlroost museariadne

2 years ago

Finished this week's prompt- the timing of this one lined up a little too well with life events. It helped to write it down. https://owlsroost.xyz/muse.html#absence

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ryomakesthings 2 years ago

beautifully written, and horribly gut-wrenching. your writing is always extremely impressive, and I can only wish you the absolute best for all the life you do get to live - thank you for choosing to spend a little bit of that time sharing your art with us, truly.

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owlroost 2 years ago

Thankfully, I get more than ten years to live if this diagnosis gets confirmed. I just won't be able to work or live independently for as long as I'd hoped for.

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manyface 2 years ago

your writing is so beautiful and moving, and absolutely devastating. the hope that runs through it is so powerful despite how terrible the circumstances are. please keep that hope alive, and stay safe. thank you for sharing your writing! - j

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pixelglade 2 years ago

The part where you're looking up at your body at thinking it isn't you yet it's still responsible for much of what you experience in life is very relatable and saddening to me as someone with chronic illnesses. Thanks for sharing and I hope you keep doing your best with the body you've got.

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moondvsted museariadne

2 years ago

finally something sparked enough thoughts for me to get something down ^_^ https://moondvsted.neocities.org/writing/muse/2024-07-01.txt

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ryomakesthings 2 years ago

really sorry for your loss. I appreciate you writing about the transition period where the wound is healing but the scar is still staring back, I think you did it and your pet justice. hope you're okay!

manyface 2 years ago

i'm really sorry for your loss! as ryo said, your writing conveys that transitive grieving period very well, and i'm tearing up from reading it. please take care of yourself! - j

vagueshape museariadne

2 years ago

finally managed to write this weeks entry. it took a while for the prompt to sink in, but i found the inspiration at 3AM. this is certainly one of my more vulnerable pieces: https://vagueshape.neocities.org/muse

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ryomakesthings 2 years ago

thank you for sharing this, I can really feel the imprint that your grandmother left in that space - I don't think the departed's spaces could ever not be theirs anymore, and I believe you put that into words beautifully. hope you're doing well!

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manyface 2 years ago

i can definitely relate to this one, and i hope you're doing alright! your writing is very sincere and bittersweet, so thank you so much for sharing it! - j

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cyntidel museariadne

2 years ago

hey, i wanted to 1, put in a response, and two, ask to join. my website is still very unfinished. here is da link: https://cyntidel.neocities.org/muse I'm not entirely sure if this is just poetry or something like that, so imma just through something out there. (right account now)

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tehuan 2 years ago

ahh how lovely !! you're always free to respond to prompts with whatever feels right-- fiction, screen writing, poetry, personal essays / journal entries, research, etc. whatever it inspires & however it brings you the most joy and fulfillment is best ! will add you to the members list now :]

the-frog-blog 2 years ago

thanks. i can tell ive got a good promt because i have to think on it.

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the-frog-blog 2 years ago

imma actually wait, its like 1 am my time. gn, or whatever time appropriate gesture that fits your time

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the-frog-blog museariadne

2 years ago

wrong account srry

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angelogistics museariadne

2 years ago

ahh strange brainchild this one, but the prompt resonated with me ^.^ https://angelogistics.neocities.org/blog/ariadne

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ryomakesthings 2 years ago

I really like how you format your pieces, and I love how visceral and uncompromising the writing is in this one - I think it paints the picture perfectly, your choice of words is very apt!

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manyface 2 years ago

I really enjoyed reading it - I love your interpretation of the prompt, and it's so grotesque in a beautiful way. - Efir

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grlrot museariadne

2 years ago

the fill for this week!!! https://grlrot.neocities.org/muse trying to get back into it <3

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manyface 2 years ago

damn, your writing is so intense and clear and… has this arresting presence that demands a reader’s full attention. it’s beautiful and cool!

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ryomakesthings 2 years ago

such a powerful piece in its brevity, every single piece of imagery you built is so beautiful and haunting!

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grlrot 2 years ago

thank you both so much!!! i often worry that I'm trying to condense too many things into really short texts so I'm really glad it worked!!!!

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owlroost 2 years ago

"maybe when you're done there won't be enough of you left to feel the loss." is such a powerful line. Agreed that the brevity of this piece adds to the impact- it doesn't have to be long to hit like a truck. Well done.

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